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Done for Carpe Diem. We are to use Michael Dylan Welch’s haiku below to write a haibun of 75 words including a haiku.
one …
together we count
the falling stars
© Michael Dylan Welch
Haibun – Stars
Something about the night had me mesmerised. Perhaps it was the breeze, perfumed with scents of jasmine drifting from his garden next door. Or the stars sparkling in the velvet sky; one moment a few exploded in fireworks, blazing. One moment they fizzled into oblivion. I willed him to come out and be part of this magic.
Minutes later he was behind me on the lawn.
shooting stars
we find each other
in the magic
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu
20/10/15
Reading Pleasure 
What a sensuous moment… you really took me there, and why sit inside when there are shooting stars outside
Thank you Bjorn. Exactly! And that is why she willed him out. 🙂
Sweet!
Thank you my friend.
🙂
I love the mix of prose and poetry, the first really set the scene for the clever ending. there’s magic in the stars, according to Disney.
Indeed there is, Ste J. 🙂 Thanks, as always.
How sweet! It reminds me of finding love in one another.
Aren’t you lucky? 🙂
Oh my, this one goes in my “keepsakes” file–so lovely, Celestine!
What a lovely thing to say, Jael. Thanks so much. 🙂
I mean it, too! 🙂
Oooooo very sensual
Boomie, how are you? It’s been ages. 🙂 Thanks for the comment. 🙂
You had me hooked with the first line 🙂
Ow, glad to hear that, Gilly. 🙂 I think this is one of my best haibuns so far if not the best. (And I do say so myself. 🙂 )
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Thank you Ladylee.
super
Thank you Candy.
Wow! It’s so nice to be back here.
And it’s great to have you back here. 🙂
beautiful !
Thank you dear. 🙂
Lovely. 🙂
Nomzi, thanks.
🙂
A touch of romance!
Yes! Thank-you . 🙂
I love it.
Thank you Nana. I’m happy you do. 🙂