Done for Carpe Diem and Haiku My Heart
(In memory of Jane Reichhold)
Stones
spring
when dancing flowers bud
among stones
2
etched in stone
words sparkle with the spring
her last wish
3
much beauty
‘Neath the ugliest stone
If we look
09 Friday Sep 2016
Posted African Women Writers, Carpe Diem, Challenges, Haiku, Haiku My Heart, Micropoetry, Poetry, Publication, Stones
inDone for Carpe Diem and Haiku My Heart
(In memory of Jane Reichhold)
Stones
spring
when dancing flowers bud
among stones
2
etched in stone
words sparkle with the spring
her last wish
3
much beauty
‘Neath the ugliest stone
If we look
“much beauty
‘Neath the ugliest stone”
How true.
Thank you Utpal. 🙂 Glad for the visit. 🙂
These are beautiful..especially liked that last one:)
Thank you Jazzy 🙂
Sometimes beauty seems so elusive, but it’s there, yes, it’s there!
Thank you for your comment, MMT.
beauty among the stones. you certainly know how to find it. congratulations on your book. wish you many sales. your haiku are so beautiful!
Double thanks Judie. 🙂
Congratulations on your publication. Yes and your words sparkle.
Thank you Gemma.
…if we only look… And you reminded me to – in your kind and caring way, my dear…
I can only thank you. 🙂
Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder..
LOL! 🙂
You have the knack of conveying such strong emotions! The 2nd one in particular really hits with the contrast with the shearing brightness and the last words makes it almost too tragic to read.
The last works as wise words indeed, even literally.
I must return to the 2nd. That glaring brightness really made the tragedy of the last words more powerful. And I agree…here far in the north the glaring brightness of Spring is not my favourite time.
I thank you Managua, fro your wonderful critique of my work Indeed, I wrote these words straight from the heart, with your deep insight totally out of my mind. 🙂
Thank you my friend.
Congratulations with the book! I love the stone-haikus… I do love stones! Hug from Holland
Marit, thank you, and thank you again. 🙂
All well penned and filed with your soul ~ thanks, ^_^
Happy Creating ~ ^_^
Carol, thanks.
Luv your haiku moods: frivolous, serious and wise.
Happy Sunday Celestine
much love…
Thanks Gillena dear.
Love the nature of these. Beautiful write!
Thank you, as always. 🙂
You’re welcome 🙂
so true!
🙂 🙂
dear celestine,
i am so happy to know your haiku will reach countless others in your great achievement -the publication of Rhapsodies! your wisdom, sensitivity and beauty weekly move each of us here. your haiku will know no bounds!
Thank you so much for the lovely compliment and encouraging words, Rebecca. You and others are my inspiration. 🙂