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It’s yet another round of the Weekly Haiku Heights Challenge and the prompt is Shroud, a tough one, in my opinion. I just hope you like it enough, because I know this isn’t one of my best. 🙂
Shroud
Sin and Pleasure duel
In a shroud of nakedness
Eden, their cover
Copyright © Celestine Nudanu
(15/10/12)
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I appreciate your patience with me as I catch up on your blogs. Thanks a million! Shalom.
Reading Pleasure 
I more than like it, Like the concept of Eden being a cover
Glad you like it, Bruce. Thanks a million. 🙂
Nice
Thanks, Boomie.
I wonder which wins? Great haiku.
My guess. Thanks, my friend.
I have to disagree. I really like it.
Thank you, Susan. Now I know it is worth it. 🙂
🙂
Great use of Eden.
Thank you, Anthony. Great to see you here.
Lovely
Thank you, Len.
I like it, it’s very clever and tells a story. I wonder why you don’t think it’s as good as usual? Is it because the words are not as colourful as usual? No matter, this is powerful, just not flowery if that makes sense. 🙂
You are spot on, Gilly. The prompt is not colourful. But I am happy you and my other friends like it. It makes everything worthwhile. 🙂
A lot of thought into those words, well done
Thank you, Brudberg. 🙂
I think this is excellent!
Thanks a mil, Teresa.
It works for that word… a tough one indeed. 😉
Thank you.
“shroud of nakedness” is a rather startling image!
Enshrouding
Yes, I agree. Very profound too. Thanks, MMT
Very original take on the prompt. I liked the idea of Eden as cover!
Glad you like this, Barbara, and it feels good to have you here again. 🙂
amazing wordplay celestine.
Thank you, my friend
really amazing… so profound in so less words!
Many thanks, Njs.